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and yet another poem~ by yours truly~

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Flower*

Views (165) Worry Created on 2-13-08 Flag

    In her dream she was a flower

    Now she doesn't understand

    Why all of her petals are being torn away

    and no one is holding her hand.

   

    Tears of confusion cloud her vision

    and everyone can see she's fading.

    She wants to laugh and play with them

    but who could no she's waiting?

    For she is not soo special

    and she doesn't posses any power.

 

    So she'll shrivel away

    a little more each day

 

    In waiting to become her own flower. 

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On March 30th 2008 Thuggishone Said :
Thuggishone I planted flowers before although I never liked the name gradener for meself...anyway very nice
On March 22nd 2008 hiphuney420 Said :
hiphuney420 awwww mann i remember writing stuff like this when i was low intense emotion poetry is always the best
On March 22nd 2008 muse4apoem Said :
muse4apoem This is fantastic! Nice flow. ~Kudos~
On March 17th 2008 Pikkakard Said :
Pikkakard Love the flow of this one.

Love it!
On March 16th 2008 seekerovtruth Said :
seekerovtruth Plant that seed of hope and you'll blossom quite nicely. :) I loved this!
On March 16th 2008 chinadoll1215 Said :
chinadoll1215 great poem :] It really has voice. good job! :]
On March 15th 2008 flutytute Said :
flutytute Love it! I didn't know anyone could express this feeling quite like you did! Amazing job! I thought I was the only one who really felt like this.
On March 14th 2008 stef4732 Said :
stef4732 wow this one really speaks to me
On March 11th 2008 LadyCha0s Said :
LadyCha0s love it.
On February 27th 2008 transgenic Said :
transgenic The rhymes are so natural, I have no idea how you do it...Amazing work, yet again!
On February 27th 2008 jonsey3922 Said :
jonsey3922 great poem, lovin it
On February 26th 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said :
EvilRaven9892 *speechless*
On February 24th 2008 gonzo4201 Said :
gonzo4201 Very deep, I really enjoy your work, keep it up!
On February 13th 2008 mcihellejane Said :
mcihellejane I really like this one-there is a lot more to it than meets the eye- a lot of pent up pain and the felling of being left out of the mix-am I right? Thats what it said to me. Anyways, you do well w/ your rhyming.
On February 13th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :
sixtiesdoll I was really low during this point~