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Forest

Views (150) Anger Created on 2-13-08 Flag

    Pieces of me still linger there

    In that place I can hate the most

    and now I feel I must go back

    to the forest, to meet with my ghost

    The trees will be crying

    for what they have witnessed

    The wind will hold still with my secret

    The poor birds will never sing again

    for they were rendered speechless.

    I'm sure  they hear my screaming

    and observe your sickeninng act

 

    You stole the best part of me

    I was only twelve

    and I can never have it back.

 

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On June 29th 2008 blueyedshababe Said :
blueyedshababe i admire your strength and ability to share your pain with the world
On April 1st 2008 Laralei Said :
Laralei I know what you mean having been in the same situation when I was 16, and not being able to even begin to face it until over a year had passed and it still hurts. Keep writing. Seriously
On March 22nd 2008 muse4apoem Said :
muse4apoem Shocking! Nice work!
On March 17th 2008 Pikkakard Said :
Pikkakard Re-read this after reading a couple of weeks ago... it was good the first time round, but much better the second time. Can definitely feel the pain in these words
On March 16th 2008 chinadoll1215 Said :
chinadoll1215 wow! Wait, I think this one is one of my favorites! I LOVE this one too! Im really sorry that you had to go through that..
On March 14th 2008 stef4732 Said :
stef4732 wow this is beautiful
On March 14th 2008 flutytute Said :
flutytute Wow... this is one of my favorites! Reminds me of my life *hugs* but at least we're both still going on!
On March 4th 2008 LadyCha0s Said :
LadyCha0s omg. wow. thats crazy...but u should b rpoud to open up about that. i admire that
On February 29th 2008 Thuggishone Said :
Thuggishone I'm speechless on this poem...I had a friend of mine/ex girlfriend go through the same thing...I wanted to whoop the guys ass but she refused cause it happened awhile ago...hugs ashley very nicely worded and sorry to hear and see theres so many sick people out there. william
On February 28th 2008 Pikkakard Said :
Pikkakard Very well written... Incredibly sad though
On February 27th 2008 transgenic Said :
transgenic Beautifully written.
On February 27th 2008 jeff2625 Said :
jeff2625 WoW pretty heavy poem..sorry, but is this about a sexual assault..if so then I am really sorry...lot's of hugs for you...
On February 26th 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said :
EvilRaven9892 Aww hun I know how you feel! ~huuuuuuugs~
On February 24th 2008 gonzo4201 Said :
gonzo4201 All I can say is .....Damn....., brilliantly done though by the way
On February 13th 2008 mcihellejane Said :
mcihellejane wow-that breaks my heart. I can't even begin to imagine. I am truly glad that you found it w/ in you to overcome share it. I'm so sorry you had to go through it though, nobody deserves that.