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Created on 2-13-08
Maybe I'm shaking
because you're not there.
The love I recieve
is another harsh stare.
You'll never dream a dream of me
or admire my thick hair
Maybe I'll leave you
Why would you care?
Maybe I'll go now
I'm nothing so special.
I'm nothing to you now
and you'll never love me.
I look to my sky now
and my heart crumbles
Maybe there's no one
My sky has no hero.
Maybe I'll try now
End this sad existence
Lower and lower
Somewhere to belong.
Never so high again
Never you're sweet song.
Please Login to post comments| On March 17th 2008 Pikkakard Said : | |
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Very sad poem, but I love the way this is written. |
| On March 16th 2008 chinadoll1215 Said : | |
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This is really sweet!
But, it is also very sad :[
I love how you do that! |
| On March 15th 2008 flutytute Said : | |
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All your poems seem to go straight to my heart, it's amazing! =) |
| On February 29th 2008 Thuggishone Said : | |
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Very nice... I need a hero in me sky... you were born a poet I see. |
| On February 27th 2008 transgenic Said : | |
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"My sky has no heroes." Brilliant! |
| On February 26th 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said : | |
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bittersweet like coco but really good |
| On February 24th 2008 gonzo4201 Said : | |
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very sad, but lovely at the same time. |
| On February 23rd 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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I like your poem! nice ryming! |
| On February 13th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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This is one of my older poems~ I was 19 when I wrote it. |
