sixtiesdoll

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Created on 2-13-08

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Look in my eyes

and you'll see my great sin.

My haunted expression

my need to stay thin.

Search my soul longer

you'll find me insane

My hands are still shaking

I'm high on cocaine.

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On June 25th 2008 blueyedshababe Said :

	i like, i know the feeling

On April 1st 2008 Laralei Said :

	Wow. The crazy thing is... hollywood actually has actors and actresses that go that route.

On March 23rd 2008 muse4apoem Said :

	Woah! It's is almost like you did do cocaine! Very good poem! ~Kudos~

On March 17th 2008 Pikkakard Said :

	Yes it was short, but a brilliantly written piece!

On March 15th 2008 flutytute Said :

	Reminds me of my dad, the cocaine part. Really good job!

On March 12th 2008 stef4732 Said :

	This is beautiful, i can tell it speaks from you soul on dealing with the mental strain to be thin :)

On February 26th 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said :

	I was gonna say BAD GIRL but thats good u dont/didnt do it...love the poem tho

On February 24th 2008 gonzo4201 Said :

	excellent imagery, short and to the point, brilliant

On February 15th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :

	and so~ I wasn't really on cocaine. It went with the damn poem I was creating. And what else rhymes with the insane part, and can also capture the need to be thin? hmm...

On February 14th 2008 Thuggishone Said :

	You've got a drug problem? You should go to rehab me thinks. lol

On February 13th 2008 tumblegrl1994 Said :

	Very nice

On February 13th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :

	tell me what you think~