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Bubble Wrapped
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Created on 5-21-08
Trapped as if by bubble wrap,
Choking with fear and doubt.
Cosumed by misery, many regrets.
How will I ever get out?
Agony, because he's gone...
Never coming back, never to return.
I love him, can't forget him.
Another year, but I still feel the burn.
Please Login to post comments| On June 27th 2008 Calypso32 Said : | |
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I just had to smile at this one. quirky and yet profound at the end, you wind things up with a bang, and the beginning gives no indication of how it will end, a rather interesting twist. Nice!~L |
| On June 21st 2008 shorteternity Said : | |
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This one's probably my favorite. |
