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what he doesn't know.Rate this Poem
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Oblivious |
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Always |
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Nearly Unnoticied |
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Not My Superhero |
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Finding Joy in the Sorrow |
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Bittersweet |
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Trust Broken |
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Bubble Wrapped |
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Disturbed. |
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Short Eternity |
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Temptation |
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Time |
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16
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The Darkness |
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Everyday Heartbreak |
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A Million Miles |
Oblivious
You go ahead-keep on being oblivious.
Ignore the world and get lost in your own.
Let your mind wander to where you want to be.
While your thoughts are away, I'm here all alone.
The funny part is- your oblivious by choice,
Uncaring to find out the real truth,
Savoring in unknowing bliss,
I'm waiting, wasting my youth.
Someday you'll wake up and know that i care,
But by then I'll be too far away.
Now I've come to realize,
I've already over stayed my stay.
Just tell me one thing: is being unaware fun?
Is it stressless to not worry or have concern?
Myself wisened, I've decided to go,
Sorry but i know I can never return.
Goodbye, Oblivious, I love you but you don't know,
But hey, I did give you a fair chance.
I really need to get over you now,
But call me if you ever awake from your trance.
| On June 26th 2008 Calypso32 Said : | |
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I enjoyed this one. Nice wording and yes, it's the oblivious ones that we tend to fall for, isn't it? |
| On June 26th 2008 onelove6fs Said : | |
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you used very good words! keep writing |
| On June 1st 2008 shorteternity Said : | |
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the ending's rough. |
| On May 2nd 2008 JustifyMisery Said : | |
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Amazing! totally love it |


