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Created on 5-10-07
Love is a strong word That people use for granted Cause every time you say it People always thinks itsROMANTIC.Love is stupid, love is kind,Love is the first thing That comes to your mind.Time after time people Use the word to get what they Want, but love is somethingThat last forever .Husband and wife, Girl and boy, Love is everywhere in the world.Remember one thing I beg of you,Whatever you do watch out For the word“I LOVE U”
Please Login to post comments| On May 10th 2007 UnLiKeYoU07 Said : | |
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I don't really understand your poem.. Because you start off talking about "love is a strong word" (which is true) but then you go on to say that "love is something that lasts forever, husband and wife.." ... (Which this is also true, it's it's true love) But, then at the end of your poem, you say to watch out for the words "I LOVE YOU".. But, when someone says "I LOVE YOU" to you, and it's true.. It's a wonderful thing. My point is that you make love sound really bad, but if it's not just someone saying it, to say it.. And if they really mean it.. (Like I said) It's a wonderful thing.. |
| On May 10th 2007 shernika Said : | |
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remember this poem because that word can also hurt you!!!!!!!!!! |
