shaunsmom22

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Someone save me from myself!

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Created on 4-11-07

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I hurt, the pain is whelling up inside

Ther is just way too much pain for me to hide

The tears run down my face

How can I escape from this deep, dark, cold space?

I need some way to escape

If only I could hide like a hero, behind a mask and cape

I am lost, I am not fine

I am thinking of ending this life of mine

What is this life for?

So, I pull the knife out of the kitchen drawer

I am thinking of causing myself harm

So, I run the blade across my arm

I watch the blood pour out

I never thought I'd take the route

All I can see is the blood

It poors from me like a flood

I drop to the floor

I don't want this life anymore

The room goes dark and cold

I try to cry out, but my life is sold

It's to late

I chose my own fate.

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On April 18th 2007 aewer Said :

	oh you're right.. it is more morbid than mine! but at the same time it's so well-written than you can look past that. 'my life is sold' - brilliant line. definately a keeper poem!

On April 15th 2007 tswieberg Said :

	I hope this isn't the way you really feel, if it is, stay strong, life gets better. If not, I like the way you paint the picture.

On April 12th 2007 drowningnlove Said :

	I like it!! really well done.

On April 11th 2007 lambofgod66 Said :

	Its pretty good and yeah its really emoish like you said. But yeah pretty good.