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My world

Views (27) Pain Created on 3-15-08 Flag

i feel the pain of the world
i feel the hatred of the world
i feel the sadness of the world
         I FEEL MY WORLD

wat i feel is wat my own lil' world feels

wat i feel is my pain hatred,and my sadness

and so if you find me on the floor

with a pool of blood smiling you shall

know why...just remember that the gun

in my hand is/was my god and the blade

under my bed is/was my happines!.

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On May 21st 2008 brosbestfrien1 Said :
brosbestfrien1 I love it u should read some of my poetry u would prolly like it and if u don't like it thats okay =)
On March 28th 2008 SoccerChik45 Said :
SoccerChik45 sad... but good.
On March 15th 2008 stef4732 Said :
stef4732 So sad but i like it :)