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I AM MY OWN WORST ENEMY |
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SUNDAY MOURNING |
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Carbohydrained |
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Reminisce |
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Life's a Drag |
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To Find The Way Out |
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Why is it we pray? |
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Yes or No |
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To Find The Way Out
Let’s Build a Poem Together 8 (in it’s completion) 3/19/08 TO FIND THE WAY OUT The commotion of the people, struck me curiously They were frantic and screaming, still I had to see The cage kept them locked, the key thrown away I felt drawn to their presence with nothing to say Shouting their pain and sorrow wanting to be free I stepped a little closer, eyeing them seriously While the parents seemed to watch this from my eyes Laughing at the dripping tears as each child cries I had to do something, no matter what came my way They still echo in my ears each and everyday Little voices of children dance around my head I rattle the cage of the phrases left unsaid I wanted to ask why they were kept there like this These thoughts in my head, I had to dismiss Fore the reasons if known, might have altered my plan Sometimes ignorance is bliss, or I’d surely have ran My mind was made up, as something's so wrong I prayed for these people, I wished the weak strong Why so much suffering abounds I do not understand Cant someone help me, just take their hand My desire required action to gain result I behooved I sought for Spirit discern as what’s to be my next move Father help me to make their nights just a little less colder Only You have power to lift this weight on their shoulders I closed my hands around theirs prayed for no more tears These words lifted their hearts and diminished their fears The chains that had bound them were suddenly broke free The caged doors that had trapped them were open to flee I still wonder sometimes why they were kept there like this These thoughts in my head, I had to dismiss Little voices of children dance around my head I no longer rattle the cage of the phrases left unsaid All that was needed was asking, with belief that He'd give I'll never forget this memory as long as I live An angel descended from heaven lead them into eternity Guided their hands and set their souls free
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Thanks to all who participated in this joint creation of verse. I had fun putting it together and I think we pulled off another interesting piece as a result. You guys rock!!! June
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