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Life IS |
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Neckties |
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pale |
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The Life Melody |
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I Miss You So |
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I give up |
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Breakin Through (Song Lyrics) |
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Breakin Through (Song Lyrics) |
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It was love at first sight |
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LOST LOVE |
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Listless Feeling of Soul Touching Hands |
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My Lover's Touch |
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WHEN YOUR NEAR |
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Created on 12-31-69
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Please Login to post comments| On April 8th 2008 mcihellejane Said : | |
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Pantoumish I would say. I did really like it-it hits close to home for me I guess. I thought you wrote it beautifully (that sounds just not right given the subject) But you did do a good job w/ it! |
| On April 7th 2008 gonzo4201 Said : | |
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I really enjoyed how you did this, alternating the lines...very creative, definitely feel the emotion in this |
| On April 7th 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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This came out of the first line popping into my head and was written in only minutes. I don’t know what you call this style of writing nor do I know if it complies with any set rules but it is what it is. |
