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Warped Voyeur

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Let’s Build a Poem Together 7

(in it’s completions)

 

Warped Voyeur

Sometimes when I am home alone

I like to dance around in my underwear

To break the dullness of the day

I bounce around without a care

"I've seen your curtains twitching,

I KNOW that you stand and stare!"

But that’s fine by me, you have your peeps

You sick and twisted, Warped Voyeur!

 

Take your pants off, and play with yourself

Go ahead, enjoy the show

For I will laugh last, you perverted creep

Because unbeknownst to you, I KNOW

I’ve called the cops and their on their way

Any second now you’ll hear the whistle blow

I'm dancing for me. It's not for you!

I'm not some kind of HOE!!!

 

Here let me shake it faster, do you like it like that?

or should I stun you with a sign that’s saying

"Come to my door", I want you right now!

In your dreams, you fool, keep praying!

‘Cause this is the closest you will ever, get to me

By yourself, you will always be laying

That is unless of course, you get a cell mate

He may snuggle up, when dues you are paying

 

I think Big Bubba is still in the joint right now

Perhaps he'd love to give you a show!

Maybe you can dance for him, and if you’re lucky

He might even give you a blow!

Make sure you write me, you little perv

I'd love to know how it goes!

I'm not going to miss you and here's some advice

Don’t peep out your curtain at one who KNOWS

 

Title - seekerovtruth

Line 1 - seekerovtruth

Line 2 - seekerovtruth

Line 3 - Chula252

Line 4 - Chula252

Line 5 - run4w4ytr4in

Line 6 - run4w4ytr4in

Line 7 - seekerovtruth

Line 8 - seekerovtruth

 

Line 9 -
seekerovtruth

Line10 - gonzo4201 & seekerovtruth

Line11 - gonzo4201

Line12 - gonzo4201

Line13 - seekerovtruth

Line14 - seekerovtruth

Line15 - sixtiesdoll

Line16 - sixtiesdoll

 

Line17 - joabizz

Line18 - joabizz

Line19 - joabizz & seekerovtruth

Line20 - seekerovtruth

Line21 - joabizz

Line22 - joabizz

Line23 - seekerovtruth

Line24 - seekerovtruth

 

Line25 - sixtiesdoll

Line26 - sixtiesdoll

Line27 - seekerovtruth

Line28 - seekerovtruth

Line29 - sixtiesdoll & seekerovtruth

Line30 - sixtiesdoll

Line31 - sixtiesdoll

Line32 - seekerovtruth

 

Thanks to all who participated in these 7 joint ventures of rhyme and verse as it has been my pleasure putting them together. I apologize for rushing through this one a bit and not allowing for others to join in towards the end, but I am about to go back to work and I needed to get this finished and posted as work will need my undivided attention for awhile. I will post number 8 sometime in the future but it may be a week or two before I can take a breather to do it as I will be in catch up mode since being off for this last little while. You all have been fabulous with your submissions and I believe we have created some very interesting poems as a result. They are all listed by name on my page for anyone who cares to have a look at them all and any and all who have participated in their creation are welcome to post the finished poem on their page too, if they so choose to do so. (Please include credits!)

Thanks!!! Peace to you all! June

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On February 27th 2008 Pikkakard Said :
Pikkakard lol... very funny
On February 26th 2008 InvisibleFlame Said :
InvisibleFlame oh wow...this is definately nice...!
On February 26th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :
sixtiesdoll It turned out hilarious~ I like it.
On February 26th 2008 joabizz Said :
joabizz June don't kill me, but I agree I like *I KNOW* a little better,, the poem came out great I love the Blow part!!! haha,, funny people here on this site!! Love it!!!!!!
On February 26th 2008 gonzo4201 Said :
gonzo4201 Pretty good, I would have been able to contribute more, but yesterday was my B-day, so everone was comin over and hangin out. Turned out good nonetheless. About the title, I was thinking the same thing
On February 26th 2008 run4w4ytr4in Said :
run4w4ytr4in i think it would be cool if the " unbeknownst" was written as unbeKNOWst with the know crossed out lol
On February 26th 2008 seekerovtruth Said :
seekerovtruth I'm am wondering now aftering reading it again if perhaps I KNOW might have been a better title since the word KNOW is in bold 3 different times in poem. I was in a hurry to get it posted but now rethink my rush as I do have a bit of time left today. Anyone who sees this tell me what you think. I can always repost it ONE MORE TIME. hahaha
On February 26th 2008 run4w4ytr4in Said :
run4w4ytr4in lol i like this one - very entertaining, i ofcourse like my lines too :p
On February 26th 2008 seekerovtruth Said :
seekerovtruth Let’s Build a Poem Together 7 (in it’s completions) I hope you don't mind that I titled it Warped Voyeur. Hey it's the first time I have done that. I think it turned out funny and that was it's intended direction. I hope you all enjoy it! Peace June