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Lets build a poem together 6 FINISHED :)

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Heaven is Waiting

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Let's Build a Poem Together 6

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Heaven is Waiting

Heaven is waiting, I will see you again

For now passing through life with shallow breaths

Tarrying this path we once walked together

Moving wearily along by these broken steps

 

My heart sinking heavier with each passing day

Because each day I wake up, without you here

Now you are my guide watching over my path

Yet I still walk alone, yearning to have you near

 

I hold on to memories of how you protected me

Sometimes I can't wait for my life to end

Just to have one more day without all this sorrow

Seems like an eternity, my friend

 

Heaven is waiting, I will see you again

Wearing time on my wrist as ticks away

Because each day I wake up, without you here

The memories behind eyes that don’t see the day

 

 

Tarrying this path we once walked together

I hold on to memories of how you protected me

They conquer the days that stand between us

My friend, it seems like an eternity

 

Now you are my guide watching over my path

Sometimes I can't wait for my life to end

Blinded by reflections that refuse to fade

Heaven is waiting, I will see you again

 

 

Title - joabizz

Line 1 - joabizz

Line 2 - Chula252

Line 3 - seekerovtruth

Line 4 - Chula252

 

Line 5 - Chula252

Line 6 - gonzo4201

Line 7 - joabizz

Line 8 - seekerovtruth

 

Line 9 - joabizz

Line 10 - gonzo4201

Line 11 - seekerovtruth

Line 12 - gonzo4201

 

Line 13 - joabizz

Line 14 - Chula252

Line 15 - gonzo4201

Line 16 - ralicia

 

Line 17 - seekerovtruth

Line 18 - joabizz

Line 19 - Chula252

Line 20 - gonzo4201

 

Line 21 - joabizz

Line 22 - gonzo4201

Line 23 - Chula252

Line 24 - joabizz

I played with this one a bit stealing lines from other verses, and adding submissions along the way. It was a puzzle for me and fun to do.

Thanks for everyone’s participation.

I will post #7 very soon. Watch for it!!!

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On July 7th 2008 Angel2k11 Said :
Angel2k11 wow... this looks like fun... could i build a poem too?... how does it work?... i would love to give it a shot... this is really good!! i enjoyed it!!!
On March 20th 2008 icsgrad07 Said :
icsgrad07 this is really good, cant wait to build a new poem
On February 25th 2008 mcihellejane Said :
mcihellejane I missed out on the creation of this one, but I must say, it turned out wonderfully :)
On February 25th 2008 seekerovtruth Said :
seekerovtruth I just reread all of them and I think so far this is my favorite to date.
On February 24th 2008 joabizz Said :
joabizz oooh I love it,, what a beautiful turn out!!! now this is my favorite so good... I am going to copy this one..lol p.s. I love the font choice, it's so graceful!!!
On February 24th 2008 seekerovtruth Said :
seekerovtruth Thanks to all who participated!!!! YOU ROCK! If you contributed to this please feel free to post a copy (with credits of course) on your page. Watch for Let's Build a Poem Together #7!!! :) June
On February 24th 2008 Chula252 Said :
Chula252 WOW this is amazing :)!!! I think it turned out great .... Everyone did such an awesome job!!!!!!!!!!
On February 24th 2008 seekerovtruth Said :
seekerovtruth I took a little creative liberty with this one.
Exercising my incessant need for control.

Muh ha ha!!!
(evil grin)
chuckles