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Lets build a poem together 5 FINISHED :)

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Created: 02/23 2008
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Category: Tragedy

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Life's a Drag

Let’s Build a Poem Together 5

(in it’s completion)

Life’s a Drag

 

As I close my eyes and lay down to rest

Wouldn’t you know it, the door bell rings

So I rise from my man made coma

As that stupid bell continues to sing

 

I run down the stairs, tripping over my feet

"I'M COMING!!", I shout toward the door

I step on a toy, it lets out a squeak

And I go flying head over heels to the floor

 

Gosh damn that squeaky toy! That tricky little boy

I shrieked, as I opened the door to the man in blue

His eyes look at me apologetically, while my soul

Began to cry as I received news only heard by few

 

They found your husbands body at a local motel

I was in complete horror, and felt such pain

“This couldn't be happening! Not to me!”

I cried on his shoulder, as I went insane

 

He was bloody and beaten, and dressed up in drag

“How can this be, this can't be true!!!”

I kept repeating myself, over and over again

Like those in distress often do

 

I have been living a lie, and he always knew

“What am I supposed to tell our son?”

The truth, for sure, he would not understand

But I have no choice, what's done is done

 

Trying my best to compose myself

I bid the officer good-bye

Silently I close the door

And hang my head to cry

 

My son appears asking Mommy what's wrong?

I turn my head to try and fake a smile

Desperately I struggle to reclaim my composure

I tell him to ask mommy after a little while

 

He looks at my face, and he knows I'm not strong

I see his expression, he got from his father

Then he smiles & tells me, “mommy do not to cry”

In his sweet little voice that affects me like no other

 

He takes his small fingers, to wipe away my tears

He looks me in the eye as he puts his hand in mine

“Don’t tell me now, let’s just both get some sleep”

With his words of comfort, I knew we'd be fine

 

As we closed our eyes and lay down to rest

Wouldn’t you know it, the door bell rings…

 

Title - Pikkakard

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Thank you all for your wonderful participation and submissions! I think it’s cool that poets from all over the world, have come together for this joint venture and may this only be one, of the many times our paths will cross, as it was my pleasure to meet and work with you all on this creation of art in verse. Peace June

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On February 23rd 2008 gonzo4201 Said: 
gonzo4201 That ending is perfect!
On February 23rd 2008 joabizz Said: 
joabizz It came out great!!!!
On February 23rd 2008 Pikkakard Said: 
Pikkakard Just noticed the last 2 lines... what a great idea for the ending. A moment of genius
On February 23rd 2008 Pikkakard Said: 
Pikkakard Oh yes... there was meant to be a pun in the title. Glad you spotted it
On February 23rd 2008 seekerovtruth Said: 
seekerovtruth Lame marquee but I'm not reposting hahahaha
Watch for Let's Build a Poem Together 6
I will post it soon. Thanks June
On February 23rd 2008 seekerovtruth Said: 
seekerovtruth I wonder if there was a pun intended in the title?

Only Pikkakard knows for sure
....................wink....................