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Life's a Drag
Let’s Build a Poem Together 5
(in it’s completion)
Life’s a Drag
As I close my eyes and lay down to rest
Wouldn’t you know it, the door bell rings
So I rise from my man made coma
As that stupid bell continues to sing
I run down the stairs, tripping over my feet
"I'M COMING!!", I shout toward the door
I step on a toy, it lets out a squeak
And I go flying head over heels to the floor
Gosh damn that squeaky toy! That tricky little boy
I shrieked, as I opened the door to the man in blue
His eyes look at me apologetically, while my soul
Began to cry as I received news only heard by few
They found your husbands body at a local motel
I was in complete horror, and felt such pain
“This couldn't be happening! Not to me!”
I cried on his shoulder, as I went insane
He was bloody and beaten, and dressed up in drag
“How can this be, this can't be true!!!”
I kept repeating myself, over and over again
Like those in distress often do
I have been living a lie, and he always knew
“What am I supposed to tell our son?”
The truth, for sure, he would not understand
But I have no choice, what's done is done
Trying my best to compose myself
I bid the officer good-bye
Silently I close the door
And hang my head to cry
My son appears asking Mommy what's wrong?
I turn my head to try and fake a smile
Desperately I struggle to reclaim my composure
I tell him to ask mommy after a little while
He looks at my face, and he knows I'm not strong
I see his expression, he got from his father
Then he smiles & tells me, “mommy do not to cry”
In his sweet little voice that affects me like no other
He takes his small fingers, to wipe away my tears
He looks me in the eye as he puts his hand in mine
“Don’t tell me now, let’s just both get some sleep”
With his words of comfort, I knew we'd be fine
As we closed our eyes and lay down to rest
Wouldn’t you know it, the door bell rings…
Title - Pikkakard
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Thank you all for your wonderful participation and submissions! I think it’s cool that poets from all over the world, have come together for this joint venture and may this only be one, of the many times our paths will cross, as it was my pleasure to meet and work with you all on this creation of art in verse. Peace June
| On February 23rd 2008 gonzo4201 Said: |
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| That ending is perfect! |
| On February 23rd 2008 joabizz Said: |
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| It came out great!!!! |
| On February 23rd 2008 Pikkakard Said: |
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| Just noticed the last 2 lines... what a great idea for the ending. A moment of genius |
| On February 23rd 2008 Pikkakard Said: |
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| Oh yes... there was meant to be a pun in the title. Glad you spotted it |
| On February 23rd 2008 seekerovtruth Said: |
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| Lame marquee but I'm not reposting hahahaha Watch for Let's Build a Poem Together 6 I will post it soon. Thanks June |
| On February 23rd 2008 seekerovtruth Said: |
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| I wonder if there was a pun intended in the title? Only Pikkakard knows for sure |


