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Lets Build a Poem Together TWO Finished

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JADED PAST

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Created on 2-17-08

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JADED PAST

Reminiscing on jaded past

Recalling everything you've ever said

Living in mercy at last

Finding freedom through truth, trial and error

Though I try to forget the truthful past

Through the years, many a lesson I learned

From the inside of the outside I am cast

Free from the world that flees from You in terror

Clinging to walls in the house of life and death

Although long ago, I can still feel those aches

I will be Yours ‘til my last dying breath

Wondrous pain this love may be

Yet as I still grow, I become more bereft

Is this love all that’s left to survive

Of the feelings, thoughts, and truths that I've left

From jaded past will I ever be free

Title - pjjustin

Line 1 - seekerovtruth
Line 2 - transgenic Line 3 - InvisibleFlame
Line 4 - joabizz
Line 5 - JoJo7898
Line 6 - mcihellejane
Line 7 - pjjustin
Line 8 - seekerovtruth
Line 9 - pjjustin
Line 10 - HumanF17TH
Line 11 - seekerovtruth
Line 12 - Panda224
Line 13 - tervboy
Line 14 - tervboy
Line 15 - tervboy
Line 16 - seekerovtruth

Thank you all for your wonderful participation and submissions! I think it’s cool that poets from all over the world, have come together for this joint venture and may this only be one, of the many times our paths will cross, as it was my pleasure to meet and work with you all on this creation of art in verse. Peace June

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On February 19th 2008 Panda224 Said :

	Yays! I got picked. ^^

On February 17th 2008 InvisibleFlame Said :

	awesome!!

On February 17th 2008 seekerovtruth Said :

	I just posted Let's Build a Poem Together 3!!! Look for it and join in the fun. Thanks! :) June

On February 17th 2008 HumanF17TH Said :

	LOVE IT! thanks for picking my line! this came out great everyone! : P

On February 17th 2008 run4w4ytr4in Said :

	Hey June this turned out well again! First line of the next one... "i Can see so much in this mirror before me"

On February 17th 2008 joabizz Said :

	I agree,, it came out great!!!!

On February 17th 2008 seekerovtruth Said :

	How about posting the first line of the next one here. What do you think???

On February 17th 2008 mcihellejane Said :

	This turned out beautifully, much better than the first I think. Can't wait for the next one!!

On February 17th 2008 seekerovtruth Said :

	I think it was finished. It was an unconventional rhyme scheme and to go further I think might lose the flow that it does still have. Thanks to all who participated!!!! YOU ROCK! If you contributed to this please feel free to post a copy (with credits of course) on your page. Watch for Let's Build a Poem Together Three!!! :) June

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