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SUNDAY MOURNING

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SUNDAY MOURNING

It was a dark and dreary Sunday morning

As I woke up and felt the emptiness

Fearing sadness would come without warning

As time seems to capture my beauty with such cruelness

The bright days mock me while the world continues turning

I open my eyes and I find myself lost

 

The dark nights laugh, as I am still yearning

The light is blinding, the air leaves me breathless

My sanity barely intact, finding vanity to be masking

With no where to start, I sit here emotionless

Cumbersome thoughts of my inner beauty leave me asking

And searching for the earnest spirit that once dwelled here

 

I'm picking up the remains of a Sunday morning that has yet to come in clear...

 

Title -
lisaljb

Line 1 - seekerovtruth

Line 2 -
ReneakaKC

Line 3 - FamousOne777

Line 4 - eldestgoddess

Line 5 - vicki721

Line 6 - MoonlightXAK

Line 7 - pjjustin

Line 8 - joabizz

Line 9 - eldestgoddess

Line 10 - mcihellejane

Line 11 - pjjustin

Line 12 - mcihellejane

Line 13 - pjjustin

Thank you all for your wonderful participation and submissions! I think it’s cool that poets from all over the world, have come together for this joint venture and may this only be the first time many of our paths will cross, as it was my pleasure to meet and work with you all on this creation of art in verse. Peace June

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On February 19th 2008 FamousOne777 Said :
FamousOne777 looks good
On February 12th 2008 run4w4ytr4in Said :
run4w4ytr4in Turned out very well!
On February 11th 2008 ReneakaKC Said :
ReneakaKC wow... it's good
On February 11th 2008 lisaljb Said :
lisaljb It turned out to be a lovely poem, everyone should be proud for contributing!!! lol, really thanks for choosing my title, though really it was a lot like yours June, all I did was change the 'morning.' I enjoyed it, and am looking forward to the next one!
On February 11th 2008 500nets Said :
500nets yikes, it turned out depressing, but the thoughts came in as one, good
On February 11th 2008 vicki721 Said :
vicki721 wonderful... i love it
On February 11th 2008 seekerovtruth Said :
seekerovtruth I thought so too. Any and all who contributed to this please feel free to make a copy to post on your page as well if you'd like. It's O.K. with me. :)
On February 11th 2008 mcihellejane Said :
mcihellejane I love it as well. I'll be waiting for the next one!
On February 11th 2008 joabizz Said :
joabizz This came out great!! I loved it!