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Lets build a poem together FINISHED :)Rate this Poem
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I AM MY OWN WORST ENEMY |
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SUNDAY MOURNING |
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JADED PAST |
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Carbohydrained |
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Reminisce |
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Life's a Drag |
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Heaven is Waiting |
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Warped Voyeur |
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To Find The Way Out |
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Solitary Reflection |
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Why is it we pray? |
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Yes or No |
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Missed Opportunity |
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Infinity |
SUNDAY MOURNING
SUNDAY MOURNING
It was a dark and dreary Sunday morning
As I woke up and felt the emptiness
Fearing sadness would come without warning
As time seems to capture my beauty with such cruelness
The bright days mock me while the world continues turning
I open my eyes and I find myself lost
The dark nights laugh, as I am still yearning
The light is blinding, the air leaves me breathless
My sanity barely intact, finding vanity to be masking
With no where to start, I sit here emotionless
Cumbersome thoughts of my inner beauty leave me asking
And searching for the earnest spirit that once dwelled here
I'm picking up the remains of a Sunday morning that has yet to come in clear...
Title - lisaljb
Line 1 - seekerovtruth
Line 2 - ReneakaKCLine 3 - FamousOne777
Line 4 - eldestgoddessLine 5 - vicki721
Line 6 - MoonlightXAK
Line 7 - pjjustin
Line 8 - joabizz
Line 9 - eldestgoddess
Line 10 - mcihellejane
Line 11 - pjjustin
Line 12 - mcihellejane
Line 13 - pjjustin
Thank you all for your wonderful participation and submissions! I think it’s cool that poets from all over the world, have come together for this joint venture and may this only be the first time many of our paths will cross, as it was my pleasure to meet and work with you all on this creation of art in verse. Peace June
| On February 19th 2008 FamousOne777 Said : | |
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looks good |
| On February 12th 2008 run4w4ytr4in Said : | |
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Turned out very well! |
| On February 11th 2008 ReneakaKC Said : | |
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wow... it's good |
| On February 11th 2008 lisaljb Said : | |
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It turned out to be a lovely poem, everyone should be proud for contributing!!! lol, really thanks for choosing my title, though really it was a lot like yours June, all I did was change the 'morning.' I enjoyed it, and am looking forward to the next one! |
| On February 11th 2008 500nets Said : | |
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yikes, it turned out depressing, but the thoughts came in as one, good |
| On February 11th 2008 vicki721 Said : | |
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wonderful... i love it |
| On February 11th 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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I thought so too. Any and all who contributed to this please feel free to make a copy to post on your page as well if you'd like. It's O.K. with me. :) |
| On February 11th 2008 mcihellejane Said : | |
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I love it as well. I'll be waiting for the next one! |
| On February 11th 2008 joabizz Said : | |
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This came out great!! I loved it! |


