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My secrets
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Created on 6-15-07
What was it that made me cry?
Is it ‘cause my life’s a lie
I try so hard to be a friend
Only to be dropped again
All I really wanted
In the end
Was the sympathy
Of a special friend
A special friend
That I knew
I could tell my
Secrets too
So my secrets stay
Known by few
That I really shouldn’t
Have told them too
I just pray
That those few
Know who not to tell
My secrets too
Please Login to post comments| On July 29th 2007 RainMan1237 Said : | |
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this is good, has the potential to really make you think |
| On July 21st 2007 babycrzzy Said : | |
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wow great poem i don't tell my secrets though except like my bestest friend in the whole world |
| On June 25th 2007 cjaskot Said : | |
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this is my favorite so far |
| On June 21st 2007 crazkoala Said : | |
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trusting someone is giving them the ability to tear you down, but trusting them not to. =) this poem portrays that very well. |
| On June 15th 2007 Steaphan101 Said : | |
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Who do you trust if you can't trust your closet friends. And where would we be if we didn't have those closet friends to tell our yearning secrets to.
This is a beautiful poem. I love it |
