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about not seeing my mom from age 9 to 22Rate this Poem
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smile for smile |
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forever |
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little black box |
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the light that was |
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dark visions |
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best friend |
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no more |
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death becomes me |
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you think you know? |
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cold intentions |
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elusive illusion |
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t.p.o.l.w.n.s |
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my heart |
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forgotten? |
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at a glance |
forgotten?
all feelings wiped , except for sorrow
taken away the hands of time
for tomorrow , i shall borrow
for things i could and should achieve
my mind , my soul , does not believe
for many moons , i missed her glow
the one who would say yes , when he said no
i'm all by myself , as i've always felt
no one to praise , no one to thank
just a conquered soul , crushed with his rank
the emptiness of a love giving heart
has torn a hole in my soul
has made me feel a world apart
has made me forget , just how it feels
to taste the love of someone who cares
all feelings wiped , except for sorrow
where were you , when i needed you most
or just to say goodnight and see you tomorrow
not a word from you , for thirteen years
all you had was fun
all i had were tears
i'm forever broken
i'll forever fall
you will never know me
your own son , at all
| On July 13th 2007 charming8 Said : | |
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awww...that is well written. |
| On June 25th 2007 101091 Said : | |
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Wow. I love it. Great job. |
| On May 21st 2007 tswieberg Said : | |
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Wow this is an awesome poem.....sad |
| On April 24th 2007 Jbelled24 Said : | |
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Very Deep! |


