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He Says |
Animated
Verse One
Write the script and tell me what to say
The story of my life is an illustration
A harmless comedy or timeless tragedy
Either way - it's not my creation
Pre-Chorus
I'm just following the footsteps given to me
Break the pencil and set me free
Chorus
Animated
Created by imaginations
I'm the personification of all they made me to be
Not my own animation
Verse Two
Create my character and define who I am
The product of someone else's design
A love full attraction or a suspenseful action
Either way – this life's not mine
Pre-Chorus
I'm just playing the role given to me
Break the pencil and set me free
Chorus
Animated
Created by imaginations
I'm the personification of all they made me to be
Not my own animation
Bridge
But no longer am I outlined by the mundane
A figment of society
Everywhere you look it's all the same
Can you say variety?
Now its time for me to turn my life over and erase
All hints of them, without a trace
Chorus
Animated
Created by imaginations
The personification of all they made themselves to be
But I'm my own animation
I broke the pencil now I'm free
Please Login to post comments| On March 6th 2008 lovesthestars Said: |
| love it |
| On January 1st 2008 themisskayla Said: |
| kool write a song... u no make this a song. :D |
| On July 11th 2007 stics917 Said: |
| dude i like it,you should put music to it |
| On July 10th 2007 Jush Said: |
| wow. nice imagery and formatt i love it. =] |
| On July 10th 2007 Rootietootchel Said: |
| i don't get it..its alright though |
| On July 10th 2007 Rootietootchel Said: |
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| i don't get it..its alright though |
| On July 10th 2007 MontageLiving Said: |
| i like.. i could so write some proper music to go underneath that.. |
| On July 9th 2007 Jeff1315 Said: |
| Iii like it :) |
| On July 8th 2007 MelissaDA Said: |
| very good.. i like it. |
| On July 7th 2007 Tigga16 Said: |
| Very creative. Love it |
| On July 7th 2007 xxxAngelicaxxx Said: |
| this is really good.keep it up! |
| On July 7th 2007 crotchrotwedgy Said: |
| Good stuff, thanks for letting me know about it. I can relate to this one, and I love the strength of emoption portrayed in the words. 8) |
| On July 7th 2007 xxcassiejayxx Said: |
| cool |
| On July 6th 2007 MythriS Said: |
| wow thats really cool. im really into manga and anime'so i could picture my favorite characters from my favorite stories saying these words...its really cool..honestly, i like it :) |
| On July 5th 2007 mrskritter Said: |
| great work |
| On July 5th 2007 grassfairy02 Said: |
| that's really amazing stuff right there |
| On July 5th 2007 Pooh455 Said: |
| i lovveee itttti wanna give u ten votes lol |
| On July 5th 2007 101091 Said: |
| Wow. I love it. You did an amazing job with it. Great job. |
| On July 5th 2007 tswieberg Said: |
| I love it...this is really good. |
| On July 5th 2007 Sissy0604 Said: |
| This is pretty kool I like it! : ) |
| On July 5th 2007 ivy81 Said: |
| pretty good though im not really into lyrics you have talent ^^ |
| On July 5th 2007 gabbytas Said: |
| wow this is really great enjoyed reading it |
| On July 5th 2007 chickenbroth Said: |
| woah, this is beastly (thats good) took my breath away and by the other comments others liked it as well, your creation stirs something inside of me its...inspiring! Wonderful piece! |
| On July 5th 2007 mcihellejane Said: |
| I really like this one-very creative and great phrases-I love the "break the pencil and set me free" |
| On July 5th 2007 kjoy428 Said: |
| wow! that's is soooo good!!!! i love it! it's a really creative way to say what i think a lot of people feel. |
