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Created on 5-1-07
ripped out all the feelings
that had any hint of love
and threw them all away
torn and scorn and shoved
screamed out on to paper
stained with fallen tears
for all that i had hoped for
was crushed right down to fears
why didnt i see it coming
how was i spose to know
that all you ever thought of me
was that im your greatest foe
i chanced out all the risks
and doomed my self from youth
because i didnt comprehend
any less than far from the truth
so now i want you to know
that it wasnt just a crush
but i couldnt let it be
yet i didnt need another rush
now theres no more need to lie
i can finally say goodbye
that had any hint of love
and threw them all away
torn and scorn and shoved
screamed out on to paper
stained with fallen tears
for all that i had hoped for
was crushed right down to fears
why didnt i see it coming
how was i spose to know
that all you ever thought of me
was that im your greatest foe
i chanced out all the risks
and doomed my self from youth
because i didnt comprehend
any less than far from the truth
so now i want you to know
that it wasnt just a crush
but i couldnt let it be
yet i didnt need another rush
now theres no more need to lie
i can finally say goodbye
Please Login to post comments| On June 8th 2007 xxxAngelicaxxx Said : | |
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you are really talented |
