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Created on 3-2-07
Bam.
and thats when it starts
a pound in my chest
a skip of my heart
Pow.
it snuck up so fast
a flash it was there
a wish it will last
Thump.
now its starting to grow
a minute a moment
i cant let it show
Crack.
im starting to break
a bump in my life
a hope he wont take
Snap.
i let go of the line
a need to be known
a picture a sign
Poof.
no need left to hide
a want to be more
a love kept inside
Please Login to post comments| On June 10th 2007 MythriS Said : | |
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this is really good...i likt the onomatopias (if thats spelt right) |
| On March 19th 2007 iheartpink67 Said : | |
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Hey great job! I like this a lot. The intros to your stanzas make it scream loud and clear the words the poem is singing to you. That probably makes no sense to you though =] |
