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What love does to you

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Views (115) Love Created on 2-20-08 Flag

My hands get sweaty

My heart starts to race

At just the thought of your warm embrace

My legs get shaky

I lose my mind

I yearn for you My teeth start to grind

The earth's all quakey

I CANT SEE

The thought of you has blinded me

My sentences are flaky

I dont make any sense

My love for you is so Intense

 

 

 

 

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On February 25th 2008 gonzo4201 Said :
gonzo4201 very good
On February 20th 2008 seekerovtruth Said :
seekerovtruth I felt like you were going to explode at any minute. lol Somebody hold this women back, she's hot to trot. :) Very good write!
On February 20th 2008 Pikkakard Said :
Pikkakard Now that's what I call being in love.

Loved how intense the poem got. Very apt for it to end with the word intense.