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Would you? Could you?

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When i give you that look and walk away mad

Could you stop yourself from shouting and give me your hand?

When i push you and i shout

Would you find it in you to hold me so tight?

When you see me at my worst

Would you still see beauty?

When i look at you unsure

Could you reassure me?

When i share a secret with you

Would you keep it locked inside you?

When my life starts to fade and my faults start to show

Would you walk away and break my heart?

Could you love me forever and eternity?

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On February 20th 2008 seekerovtruth Said :
seekerovtruth Gosh don't we all wish for this type of relationship. emmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
On February 19th 2008 transgenic Said :
transgenic Really, really loved it! Bittersweet..
On February 18th 2008 joabizz Said :
joabizz yes you would hope that they could? and that they would? and sometime wish they better not!! lol, I liked it..
On February 17th 2008 Pikkakard Said :
Pikkakard Kinda sad... but a really nice poem.

Some really good questions in there and a great title, too.