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I'm Sorry, Goodbye

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Do you know i love you?

I think that you do!

But not in the way that I wanted  to!

Things have gone on through time,

From the devestating to the truley sublime,

I'm not the same person anymore

I'm not the same girl who walked out that door!

 

Its not just the times that have changed me,

But the things in life ive been made to see,

Ive gone where angels fear to walk,

You close your ears but ive been made to talk!

So here i am, yes this is me,

A mere shadow of what i used to be! 

 

I've disappointed you i know,

But like you say its the seeds we sew

I think i've done whats best all round

I've been commited to the ground,

Burried in this holy place U

Now im finally out of your face!

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On February 20th 2008 seekerovtruth Said :
seekerovtruth Whoa. I too did not expect this ending. This one packed a whallop! Right in the kisser!
On February 8th 2008 Pikkakard Said :
Pikkakard Ooooooohhh... didn't expect that ending at all.

I really like it. Especially the well placed cross.