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Views (186) Anger Created on 9-3-07 Flag

I hate you so much my teeth ache in your presence,

My blood boils at my complete discontent with your emotionless figure,

Why dont you care what's best for yOUR children

Why do you insist your way is right?

I try to talk to you, to discuss yOUR childrens feelings,

Their discontent with your behaviour and wreckless guidance

But you do not listen your ears are closed to spite me

I wonder what yOUR children will think of YOU in years to come?

When the brightness of your smile fades & they see you for who you are

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On February 20th 2008 seekerovtruth Said :
seekerovtruth Forgive him for being a broken human being, let go of the resentment, love him in spite of himself, and then leave the (_0_)!!!! JMO
On September 4th 2007 Pooh455 Said :
Pooh455 very true
On September 3rd 2007 transgenic Said :
transgenic I absolutely love it!
On September 3rd 2007 Pikkakard Said :
Pikkakard WOW! I can definitely feel the anger in this poem. Under normal circumstances I would say give this poem to him so that he understands, but I don't think he'd get the message.

Harsh, but justified in my opinion.
On September 3rd 2007 pru1989 Said :
pru1989 dont hold so much hate inside you i feel your pain but change is always for the best you just have to see it that way.