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Created on 6-20-08
life shall live forever,
and beyond,
the heaven above has dawned,
on me,
i see what the lord lets me,
it helps to believe in him,
or the veiw will dim,
he is the savior,
we live we by in his behavior,
whether mad,
or sad,
we live for him,
he gives us veiw that dim,
by amounts,
yes he counts,
our love for him,
that'll never dim,
he is the father,
of life,
and love,
he is above,
of the clouds,
watching us,
watch him
Please Login to post comments| On June 22nd 2008 DeathMetalPunk Said : | |
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Love it! |
| On June 20th 2008 rosebrugh Said : | |
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tuen to amazing grace sort of slips away...srry |
