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it is a copy off of www.emo-corner.comRate this Poem
My Poems
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Monkey see, monkey do |
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numbing pain |
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Gone in a Flash |
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clover of worry |
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mistake and mistake again |
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it never changes |
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trusting gone |
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tears |
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something amiss |
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fight punch hit |
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blame it hurts |
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falling |
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pitterpatter, |
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weird poem |
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why me? |
Alone
two shots of hate from a mouth as loud as a gun,
like an assasin ... who does it for fun.two deafening blows in a war that has just begun,
life gone away...i'm done.two red roses sitting on my coffin, the wind blows, leaving only one
the world i know disappears...like the setting sun.
| On July 18th 2008 HisRedRose Said : | |
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you have to be the most articulate 12 year old i have come across. I love your writing. xx |
| On June 19th 2008 imtheonlyme4 Said : | |
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ITS GOOD but sad !!! :( |


