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pain
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Created on 6-17-08
pain,
that word,
drives you insane,
makes you cry,
and scream why oh why,
makes you see,
everything isnt what its supposed to be,
if everything was okay,
but it isnt,
i still gotta pay,
the price of hate,
it hurts,
just as my life parted,
so did i,
and i ask why...
Please Login to post comments| On June 17th 2008 101091 Said : | |
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I love it. It's got so much emotion in it, yet it's so simple. Incredible work. |
| On June 17th 2008 rosebrugh Said : | |
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tell me wat u think |
