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i am hurting right now and this helped

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suicide

Views (64) Tragedy Created on 6-6-08 Flag

your face is a ghostly pale,

you try to end your problems with ale,

it doesn't work so you take a knife,

to end your fucking life,

you just can't bring,

youself to hear the ring,

of heaven above,

so you try choking on a glove,

you spit it out,

and begin to pout,

for nothing you do seems to help

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On June 17th 2008 nickynicole901 Said :
nickynicole901 wow..u dont seem like the deppressed type..its alright..
On June 8th 2008 bittyb1 Said :
bittyb1 it was pretty good!
On June 7th 2008 twilight8218 Said :
twilight8218 if you are seriously thinking about suicide please don't. I can give many reasons to why you shouldn't. however if this is just a poem then it was fairly good.
On June 6th 2008 rosebrugh Said :
rosebrugh tell me what u think