Created By
Author's Comments
hey it is supposed to sound like a rapRate this Poem
My Poems
+43
|
+
5
|
Monkey see, monkey do |
|
+
4
|
numbing pain |
|
+
7
|
Gone in a Flash |
|
+
3
|
clover of worry |
|
+
4
|
mistake and mistake again |
|
+
3
|
it never changes |
|
+
4
|
trusting gone |
|
+
8
|
tears |
|
+
4
|
something amiss |
|
+
1
|
fight punch hit |
|
+
3
|
blame it hurts |
|
+
3
|
falling |
|
+
5
|
pitterpatter, |
|
+
3
|
weird poem |
|
+
3
|
why me? |
emotion
Views (39)
Created on 6-6-08
rain,
it matches my emotions,
even though its just a notion,
its almost like a potion,
it makes me feel sad,
but thats too bad,
i bet i had,
not gotten ,
the notion,
that rain,
matches,
my emotion
Please Login to post comments| On June 6th 2008 Sunloverz Said : | |
|
OMG THIS IS SO GOOD :O |
| On June 6th 2008 rosebrugh Said : | |
|
tell me what u think |
