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LOVE
love,
thats the word,
that is absurd,
full of hate,
and they just want sudate,
love hurts,
like cuts on a warm day,
except it is way,
in a cold cold day,
not a warm day in May,
but a cold day in January,
so you see love hurts,
| On June 8th 2008 BabyPenguins Said : | |
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yeah love does hurt...so its very true... |
| On May 31st 2008 rosebrugh Said : | |
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thank you for the compliments |
| On May 31st 2008 xHickChick789x Said : | |
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Ooah wow love ur vocab :) Nicely written! |
| On May 31st 2008 twilight8218 Said : | |
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ahh yes the word thats meaning has been changed so many times... anyway fairly good |
| On May 31st 2008 kissofasia Said : | |
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Oh i love the rhymes...and this is very true.very nice. |
| On May 31st 2008 rosebrugh Said : | |
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tell me what you think |


