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instead of the rain

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pitterpatter,

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pitterpatter,

sittertatter,

rain drops fall,

and then they stop,

yes all,

they are frozen in mid air,

you get up,

without a care,

and say sup,

when you look in the mirror,

for it is your own tears,

instead of the rain,

and it was they that came,

and stopped

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On August 30th 2008 brokenvampire1 Said :
brokenvampire1 kalenna4..if u dont like her stuff stop reading it no one is forcing u..i actually like this one and its not a list with words because i understand it just so shut up...go read poems on ur lvl that just plain out tell you what they're talking about..thanks..nice poem kat =]
On July 6th 2008 kalenna4 Said :
kalenna4 i dont get it my teacher said it not a pome its a list with words
On May 17th 2008 kissofasia Said :
kissofasia Lovely.......