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Created: 09/14 2007
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Category: Pain

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Dead Inside

Everyday you see me You see my smiles

My laughter My joy 

But you never see inside

You don’t see the sadness in my eyes

That cant be hidden by a smile

That the laughter is forced

That the joy is only skin deep

 

Do you love me? You think so

And I used to believe it
But how can you love someone

If you truly don’t know them

 

You love an image of me

You love someone who used to exist

But has long been lost In the deeps of depression

Will she ever be found again? 

And so I’ll let my blood run free From the scars you’ll never find

And maybe one day You’ll look closely at my smile

And realize that I’m dead inside
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On November 4th 2007 Thugnastay227 Said: 
Thugnastay227 but never wholly dead....there is always a sliver of life that lies dormant and plays dead and one comes along and finds it and nurtures it like a plant on it's last leg. and allows it to blossom. I know the scenario of this poem well. good work.
On October 23rd 2007 OshadowO Said: 
OshadowO nice flow to the poem - you should post some more cuz i really liked this one
On October 3rd 2007 livingonly4Jes Said: 
livingonly4Jes brought tears to my eyes...that poem is so true to so many ppl even myself sometimes
On September 28th 2007 transgenic Said: 
transgenic I love this! Easy to relate to, and I like your word choice!