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I wonder is this what my brother thoughtRate this Poem
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Created:
08/29 2008
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127
Category:
Love
My Poems
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Fire and Ice |
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the clown |
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just another pill |
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alone again |
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nothing |
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mad man |
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mind on fire |
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just another pill
Just another pill
just another pill
just another pill
mind is racing
hands are shaking
just another pill
mind’s on fire
conscience won’t retire
just another pill
pulse is pounding
heart resounding
just another pill
memories come flooding
voices come humming
just another pill
fear comes hearing
anger is jeering
just another pill
the cut is deep
breathing is weak
just another pill
just another pill
just another pill
just another...........pill?
| On August 29th 2008 ausjo Said: |
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| Gosh how moving. |
| On August 29th 2008 joabizz Said: |
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| wow, thats so sad, he didn't make it did he?? I can relate to this poem, Rob I knew someone who almost lost thier life, not sure any more if she is still alive!! thanks for sharing.. :-( |
| On August 29th 2008 Foreverlyn Said: |
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| intense! |


