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have you ever felt this way?

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Views (62) Pain Created on 2-6-08 Flag

in my cell

me all alone

i pace in the darkness

i have constructed alone

in my mind

i hear no good night

i wait for mornings new fright

light creaps in

and whispers i hear

nothing i see

but shadows i fear

laughing and jeering

as they pull out their spears

my blood flows free 

as a childs fresh tears

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On August 18th 2008 ausjo Said :
ausjo Very emotive. Nice job!
On April 13th 2008 Tigga16 Said :
Tigga16 Love it! Great details and everything. Definately could visualize it happening. My sister's afraid of clowns so she could probably relate.
On February 16th 2008 MikeyLH Said :
MikeyLH I'm so glad that I was never traumatized by clowns when I was younger. If I was, this poem would have freaked me out, even though it did give me a chilling image. Nice one!
On February 7th 2008 joabizz Said :
joabizz ooooh, you gave such an image in my mind.. It was kind of frightening!! and sad at the same time.. This was very good... I told you before that you should write more poems... let me know when you have more...