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Damn You!
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Created on 7-17-07
Damn You!
The phone rings
Its you again
Damn you!
You told me it was over
You said we could
No longer talk
Two months have gone by
Have not seen or
Heard from you
Trying to forget you
And let go of you
But then…
The phone rings
Its you again
Damn You!
Karen
1/9/07
Please Login to post comments| On July 17th 2007 ashley6391 Said : | |
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yah thats happend to most of us...but it stops eventually they cant call 4ever! n e wayz good job on this one! |
| On July 17th 2007 PoeticPang Said : | |
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argh,,, yepp,, hate when that happens,,, urgh,, good poem, tho the flow didn't really go,, but, the thought surpassed,,,, could have used abit more expression,, maybe bolded the "Damn You!" lines or whatnot,,,, yeahmzz... good job tho~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Pang |
