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pain on an ordinary day
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Created on 12-20-06
An ordinary day
Started out just like any other
Until someone found
A note and gun
In that random locker
Lots of names, they said
Where on that list
But one name stood out
Among the rest
My brother, Charlie
Hi name was written on
That hit list
How dare them
Write down his name
He and the others on the list
Are not to blame
They should hold their
Heads down in shame.
For don’t they know the
Pain they would have caused
If one single shot was aimed
Lots of live could have been taken
Tears would have fallen
The pain would have
Been to hard to sallow
All because of a couple of teens
Who thought it would solve
All their problems
By taking aim on that
Same ordinary day.
Please Login to post comments| On April 20th 2007 mcihellejane Said : | |
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I can't imagine what goes through people's minds and makes them think to do this. It's scary and very sad. I liked this poem |
| On January 26th 2007 sunny102 Said : | |
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That is scary...too much hate in this world! |
| On January 19th 2007 Liz8787 Said : | |
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People don't think about what they do. Is your brother OK now? |
| On January 16th 2007 rainythoughts Said : | |
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the scary part is that i really did happen. |
| On January 9th 2007 ChaoticKimmy Said : | |
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So true, and it happens all the time. Did this really happen? |
