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Created on 3-4-08
If I woke up tomorrow and I couldn't see it wouldn't matter because I would always remember kind face, beautiful eyes and nice smile.
If I woke up tomorrow and I couldn't hear it wouldn't matter becuase I would always remember the sweetest and nicest things you said to me.
If I woke up tomorrow and I couldn't walk it wouldn't matter becuase I will always remember the moon lit walks on the beach, running for cover under the falling rain.
If I woke up tomorrow and I couldn't move my back it wouldn't matter because I will always remember the countless piggy back rides, and watching the stars fall out out of the sky.
If I didn't wake up tomorrow I hope you remember me has much as I remembered about you and other countless memory's
Please Login to post comments| On April 9th 2008 angelalone Said : | |
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that's pretty awesome.ten times better than anything i write.thumbs up. |
| On March 25th 2008 Jumpy1811 Said : | |
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this is a wonderful poem, it really made we wanna cry in a good way... |
| On March 23rd 2008 daywalker05 Said : | |
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its a good poem. |
| On March 22nd 2008 Akinka Said : | |
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Beautiful.... |
| On March 19th 2008 gennae Said : | |
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Oh WOW! You are FREAKIN awsome at writing! |
| On March 16th 2008 xxxAngelicaxxx Said : | |
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this is def beautiful.. u r very good at writing. |
| On March 16th 2008 LoVe0612 Said : | |
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i love this poem!!! u have a talent!! |
| On March 9th 2008 Trouble2009 Said : | |
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this is beautiful, sincere, and just amazing!!! ur a great poem writer and from what i gather u have a great heart!! |
| On March 9th 2008 SpiffyKnickers Said : | |
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that was so sweet! ^^ |
| On March 8th 2008 teeniegirl015 Said : | |
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This is so perfect in so many ways. It's not something people would regularly think about. This is sooo good. I'm off to read your other ones. |
| On March 7th 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said : | |
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that's beautiful |
