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Wanting to hold on, so easy yet so hard.Rate this Poem
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Fingertips
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Created on 2-4-08
The quiet moments when I can feel the passion live a little
When I'm tumbling round like a fool falling in the light of love
Drawing darkness to pull you away
The sound of your voice seduces me to go to the edge
To hold you makes me want every part of you
Fingertips like silk touches to the bone
Underneath this playing we dive and almost drown
This feeling is what is clawing me out
And the net I pull to hide further inside your heart
Is so fragile; enough to keep me in
Drag me, pull me, make me behave
Or I will fall to the sound of our strange and bitter cries
The stormy seas rage upon me
Whispering goodbyes
Sweet and hard
Gravestones of lovers
Apart in their embrace of one another
Please Login to post comments| On February 4th 2008 purplepixie888 Said : | |
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Tanx so much :) it cool for me to hear what ya think :) |
| On February 4th 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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I think it's really good and you should write some more. Let me know if you post a new one. I'll come and have a peek. June |
| On February 4th 2008 purplepixie888 Said : | |
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If you stumble upon dis...please tell me what u think...:) |
