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Heart Of Stone
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Created on 6-9-07
Your words cut deep just like a knife
Make me bleed
Poisonous venom you live in hate
Feed me fear
It's hard to see behind your lies
As your words betray your thin disguise
Words adrift in a sea of lies
Lost in the tides
Destroy at will to find what you lack
A stab in the back
It's hard to see behind your lies
As your words betray your thin disguise
Your intention is hard to erase
A masquerade with an angel's face
In your eyes the burning desire
Words behind a heart of stone
Don't mean a thing
In your eyes the burning desire
I want to see what's real tonight
Please Login to post comments| On June 11th 2007 PoeticPang Said : | |
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wow,,, very amazing,, and u put great use to the bold marks of words to describe the specific words u wanted to stand out,, i really appreciate that ...... really great,, cept for if u were intending to make it 'cold' (like a stone),, u should use other words besides 'burning'.... in 'in your eyes the burning desire',,, u could use ... hmmm...1)cheating, 2)tricking, 3)????idk... burning=hurt/cheat/hot/fire,etc.... .......... ........ other than that,, i really like it,,, really great job u've done here... ~~~~~Pang |
| On June 9th 2007 mcihellejane Said : | |
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I love the edge in this poem. Cold-that is what comes to mind. Great job! |
