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With Blank Eyes
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Created on 5-31-07
Drunk with the despair of the weak
He tightens his grip on her frail neck
Her pain is his pleasure
Suffering becomes his drug of choice
Like an artist at the canvas
Creating a beautiful work of art
Contorting her body
Tearing her ligaments
Snapping her bones
Lacerations adding the finishing touches
Fueling his euphoric pleasure
Skilled as a surgeon
He separates flesh from bone
This whore's become his trophy,
Lips adorned with crimson
Lain gracefully in the corner
She stares up with blank eyes
He slowly makes his way over to the computer
The last part of his masterpiece:
Writing a poem about it......
Please Login to post comments| On June 11th 2007 PoeticPang Said : | |
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wow... ouch,,,,,,, it's terribly intimadating,, makes me wonder why u wrote this??? ,,, hmmmmmm... very terrifying poem..... i like it,,, heheh,, ^____^ better than the sad depressing poems everybody seems to be writing (which obviously included me).... it's very harsh,,,, i like this reality... and the metaphors are wow,,, yeah,, yeah,, yeaaaah,, LOL~~~~~Pang |
| On June 4th 2007 mcihellejane Said : | |
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I love this poem-the ending is so different, but it makes the whole piece that much better! |
| On June 2nd 2007 KKKonfederacy Said : | |
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wow, that's all harmonizes together and leaves a shocker at the end. You really utilize different styles of writing, that's pretty amazing |
| On June 1st 2007 RoKkErBiTcH Said : | |
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omg...thats deep. |
