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Last Vestige
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Created on 5-29-07
The only vestige of her memory
Is the picture hung from the nail
Driven through my heart
Darkness drawing me closer into its grasp
Give me the pain of something real
Falling on the shards of hatred and pain
Still feeling nothing
Losing sleep, depleting fast
Echoes in my head push silence back
Slipping through the cracks of solitude
This cold floor is my only friend...
Please Login to post comments| On June 11th 2007 PoeticPang Said : | |
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awwwww,. *huggles*........... tis gonna be all A-oke hun,, promise!.... ^_________^....... great use of words,, the adjective u used to describe the background and surroundings,,,, very great,, superb,,,,, and the way u describe things in a somewhat order really makes the reader feel ur loneliness,,,, and suffering,, and,, ugh,,, please write happier poems,,, ????........... ~~~Pang ~_; |
| On June 4th 2007 mcihellejane Said : | |
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This one is really sad, but I love it~ |
| On May 29th 2007 puckettn67 Said : | |
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bree breeeee |
