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Fading Sentiments
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Created on 5-17-07
The walls of reality are torn down
Redundant sympathy reveals itself
The world slipping through my fingers
Showing the urgency of her lies
Fading sentiments of the past
Buried in the darkness of night
False hopes of lossless paradise
The streams of uncertainty plaguing my mind
Failures of my commitments
Praying the wolves are kept at bay
Revive me, oh love, make this heart beat
The boundaries of my soul enclosed in the veil of sorrow
Shadows become the solace I crave
Eyelids become the canvases for dreadful nightmares
Destiny unraveling itself at my feet
The pains of yesterday outweigh the future's hope
Cling to this moment tightly
This will be our last....
Please Login to post comments| On May 19th 2007 mcihellejane Said : | |
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Very nice! |
| On May 19th 2007 PoeticPang Said : | |
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*depressed*.... aaahhhh,,,, aaarrrgh,,, i hate sad poems,,, although they hit deeper than the sappy-happy ones,,, i love ur use of words... the metaphors enclosed on each sentence,,,, and i looove the ending,,, how strange,,, hmmmmm... ~~~~ Pang |
