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MY LIFE |
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the after life |
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it is you |
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It's to late for me |
the after life
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Created on 6-1-07
you thought you hurt me
not even close
a life of missery
is what you chose
you made the scars
you drank the blood
as my body just sat there
in the mud
as my soul
wonders the streets
the gates and i
wil never meet
so now you live your piontless life
and now im coming.....
with a knife
after this i'll feel just fine
i'll end your life
as you ended mine
Please Login to post comments| On June 5th 2007 pruetta Said : | |
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thnx |
| On June 1st 2007 phhs2010marie Said : | |
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NOW THAT WAS GOOD =] I loved this one, I felt your emotion, VERY GOOD! |
| On June 1st 2007 Lostindark666 Said : | |
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i thinks its awesome! your good at poetry
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| On June 1st 2007 pruetta Said : | |
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soooooooooo what do ya think |
