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MY LIFE

Views (102) Anger Created on 5-14-07 Flag

                              theres only been 2 deaths

                              but they'll be more

                             all my thoughts are filled with gore

                            i only think about the bad

                         when i die you'll all be glad

                    my favorite thing to do is cry

                   why does everybody lie

                  the world will never be the same

               people will always think im lame

            while i think about my greive

               ill have to say goodbye& leave

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On June 15th 2007 MuzicLuver2121 Said :
MuzicLuver2121 LOVE IT!!! Its original!!! =]
On June 13th 2007 slipknotbabe Said :
slipknotbabe ill message you on myspace
On June 13th 2007 slipknotbabe Said :
slipknotbabe i like it
On June 1st 2007 phhs2010marie Said :
phhs2010marie well I mean the thought put into it is amazing cuz you really are puttin your thought into it, lets see.....what could you do to better it.....well in general you could make ppl get involved with the poem make them feel the emotion (I know easier said than done) but if I could really understand exactly how you were feeling that would make me love this poem, but still I like it. =]
On May 28th 2007 Lostindark666 Said :
Lostindark666 i like it, the darkness and you're sharing with ppl of whats in your heart rite?
On May 28th 2007 Lostindark666 Said :
Lostindark666 i like it, the darkness and you're sharing with ppl of whats in your heart rite?
On May 25th 2007 lavonea Said :
lavonea well i kinda find it to be side. but in a crazy way i can see what ur saying! good job
On May 14th 2007 pruetta Said :
pruetta i dont know about you but i think its kinda lame what can i do next time