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Will
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Created on 8-30-07
I feel the tug upon my sleve
I think the thoughts of success
I dream the dream of me at peace
I feel the swell of my heart
I see the way the look at me
I know the way i feel
It dosnt fit into my soul
The way I feel about it
The pull of sucess
The taste of acheivment
The lust of completing the dream
I will one day fill my shoes
The one s i have created myself
The only way i will acheive my goal
Is to let all my passion release
I feel it hot i feel it flow
Out around my soul
I now see how they think of me
They will never understand
Please Login to post comments| On October 20th 2007 trev88m Said : | |
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i love the passion and the determination in this one, it feels very you |
| On September 29th 2007 wannabetimthe1 Said : | |
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awesome poem........once again love the emotion |
| On August 30th 2007 Vestque Said : | |
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Wow, very deep! |
| On August 30th 2007 alexia66 Said : | |
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wow , nice poem, its got a good flow and packed with feelings. |
