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Blackend Skies
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Created on 2-24-08
What is this sadness?
It pours like rain
What is this cold cold pain?
It grips and drags me to madness
Who's eyes are these staring back?
Not mine...no
Those eyes died long ago
My fist swings, it makes the glass crack
What is this soft touch?
Like a snow flakes kiss
The pounding rain of summers bliss
This isolation I know too much
Who's heart is this?
Not mine....no
Because it was whole long ago
For too long have I gone without your kiss
What is this darkness?
Its like a cover
Keeping me warm, making me suffer
Making me careless
Who's life is it this time?
These arms, legs, and eyes
This life that has blackend the skies
Not mine, no.....not mine
Please Login to post comments| On April 16th 2008 rockstar0001 Said : | |
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omg. you are soo good at writing. i love it. i really do. you should write more often.♥ |
| On March 13th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said : | |
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Aw its beautiful written. |
| On March 5th 2008 spongbobsgirl Said : | |
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lovin' it dude, keep it up! |
| On February 29th 2008 assumetheworst Said : | |
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wow, that vas very very goods! great job :) |
| On February 28th 2008 HumanF17TH Said : | |
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i love it!! its amazing! |
| On February 28th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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This is really good. I liked it! This is the first time I've read anything of yours. Ilike your style. |
| On February 26th 2008 xxMCRxROXxx Said : | |
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Amazing=) |
| On February 25th 2008 lovelychick987 Said : | |
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that was perfect!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ~madison~ |
| On February 25th 2008 timmybedunah Said : | |
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sweet! |
| On February 24th 2008 mcrfan4life66 Said : | |
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OMG baby this is soo amazing, i love u so much!! u are so good at writing poems!! i know its been too long *tear* |
