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Created:
05/25 2008
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53
Category:
Pain
My Poems
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60
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My Hearts Desire |
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33
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The Lost Thoughts Of A Dieing Poet |
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22
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Love And Its Sick Ways |
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21
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The Final Decision |
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18
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Forever Wounded |
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18
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Thoughts Of The Lost |
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14
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Used Up |
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14
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Confusion |
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19
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Suicide |
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33
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Deadly Kiss |
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12
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My Last Thought |
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15
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My Love |
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13
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Your Effect |
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12
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Clearing Thoughts |
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12
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My Shell |
Metaphorically Alive
the rain is falling
but is tinted red
the sky is falling
and the world is dead.
vision is failing
and time's running out;
nowhere to turn
and soaked with doubt.
the rivers are flooding
and becoming unclean;
trees are sulkin,
awaiting the dread.
knees give out,
flood the nerves with pain;
arms reach upward
then fall in vain.
winds are screaching,
hiding the screams;
lightning is snapping,
illuminating the scene.
eyes are glazed,
shinning a dusky grey;
fingers limp,
starting to fray.
the sun is setting,
leaving the skies dark;
clouds amalgamating,
destroying all focus.
body disintegrating,
becoming detritus;
world crumbling,
ceasing to exist.
| On May 25th 2008 Zikizue123 Said: |
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| Spectacularly metaphorical! |
| On May 25th 2008 chayeah22 Said: |
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| Wow very deep. I like your work. |
| On May 25th 2008 tiffany1058 Said: |
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| I love it |


