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Created: 04/14 2008
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Category: Pain

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Breaking Point

The nights are dark
Filled with regreat
And drenched in pain.

Everyone sleeps as he drowns,
Screams for help
And it falls on deaf ears.

Lies haunt him;
Whisper in his ear,
Tear at his subconcious.

Fear silences him till night
Where no one can see his pain,
The pain that shadows him,
Covers him like Posies cover death's bitter smell.

The sounds of an end haunt him,
Walk like the dead in his mind,
Push at him to give up.

The silent fight is waged
It burns in his every fiber,
He seeks a release
But finds no coping measures.

The pain is overbearing
It crushes his hopes,
Makes a mockery of his dreams.

The long periods alone take their toll,
He is left screaming and desperate
He prays to the angel of death,
Wanting a fast release from the pain.

No one responds to his cries,
No one cares for his suffering,
No one....cares.

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On May 25th 2008 chayeah22 Said: 
chayeah22 Very original. I loved it.
On April 17th 2008 6615sweet Said: 
6615sweet wow....i like this poem...even thow it is very different from most poems cause of how u wrote it.....i like it.,.,.,. so keep it up...if u want