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Created: 10/08 2007
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Category: Passion

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The Love That Went Untold...

She passes him in the halls

Pretending not to look

Yet she can’t look away

 

With every pass she wants to scream

Scream out how she feels

Scream out how it’s not fair

How it isn’t right

 

Yet she holds back

Holds back the pain

Holds back the feelings that burn soo deep in her heart

 

She cant say anything to him

He is popular

And she is just a geek

A geek with a silly crush

 

But she makes a choice

The choice that will determine how she will go on…

She tells him

Tells him everything

Pours her heart and soul out in front of everyone

 

They laughed

They mocked

They scolded and teased

 

And that night she went home crying

Went home to take action

To make her life as complete as she could

 

She began to dig in a drawer

Looking for her only friend

The friend that would make the pain end

 

This friend was the last thing she had

The last thing that didn’t mock her

Didn’t make her feel like a fool

 

So she confided all her pain in it

Let it hold her life in the end

And in doing so she let it take over

Let it end the life she thought was nothing

 

And at her funeral the boy she loved sat alone

Sat holding a letter

The letter that told her everything

The letter that could have stopped this death

 

It said how he really felt

How he loved her back

That he was afraid of his friends

Of what they would think

Of how they would react

 

And now he sits alone

Secluded from the world

Stuck with her death on his shoulders

Weighing down on his poor soul

Until he dies and makes it right….

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On May 25th 2008 chayeah22 Said: 
chayeah22 Omgosh...I love this. It reminds me of my past. I liked your word choices. It didn't remind me of others I have seen. Very good.
On October 19th 2007 California1516 Said: 
California1516 this is sooooooooo incredibly sad..yet so amazingggg..
On October 8th 2007 ashattack411 Said: 
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wow...this is amazing
On October 8th 2007 Kimmyburly Said: 
Kimmyburly wow... I felt this one.
On October 8th 2007 Burnley14 Said: 
Burnley14 I actually cried a little for this one. It's a lot like other things i've read, but it still gets me everytime.