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The Love That Went Untold...
She passes him in the halls
Pretending not to look
Yet she can’t look away
With every pass she wants to scream
Scream out how she feels
Scream out how it’s not fair
How it isn’t right
Yet she holds back
Holds back the pain
Holds back the feelings that burn soo deep in her heart
She cant say anything to him
He is popular
And she is just a geek
A geek with a silly crush
But she makes a choice
The choice that will determine how she will go on…
She tells him
Tells him everything
Pours her heart and soul out in front of everyone
They laughed
They mocked
They scolded and teased
And that night she went home crying
Went home to take action
To make her life as complete as she could
She began to dig in a drawer
Looking for her only friend
The friend that would make the pain end
This friend was the last thing she had
The last thing that didn’t mock her
Didn’t make her feel like a fool
So she confided all her pain in it
Let it hold her life in the end
And in doing so she let it take over
Let it end the life she thought was nothing
And at her funeral the boy she loved sat alone
Sat holding a letter
The letter that told her everything
The letter that could have stopped this death
It said how he really felt
How he loved her back
That he was afraid of his friends
Of what they would think
Of how they would react
And now he sits alone
Secluded from the world
Stuck with her death on his shoulders
Weighing down on his poor soul
Until he dies and makes it right….
| On May 25th 2008 chayeah22 Said: |
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| Omgosh...I love this. It reminds me of my past. I liked your word choices. It didn't remind me of others I have seen. Very good. |
| On October 19th 2007 California1516 Said: |
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| this is sooooooooo incredibly sad..yet so amazingggg.. |
| On October 8th 2007 ashattack411 Said: |
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| wow...this is amazing |
| On October 8th 2007 Kimmyburly Said: |
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| wow... I felt this one. |
| On October 8th 2007 Burnley14 Said: |
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| I actually cried a little for this one. It's a lot like other things i've read, but it still gets me everytime. |


